Thursday, November 13, 2008

Writers Wordshop Thursday: Haiku

Tree on Morning Walk

Strip'ed of your coat
Reveals the abandoned homes
Left for warmer climes

13 comments:

TSannie said...

I love haiku and yours is lovely!

Jen said...

that just says it all.

Mama Dawg said...

That was beautiful.

Kimberly said...

Oh, it is so on. I'm so totally writing my own Haiku. This week. Maybe. Ok, it's on the list.

Snap!

Amy McMean a.k.a McSunshine said...

nice job. I'm not creative in a haiku kinda way.

Sometimes Sophia said...

Very poetic. The imagery was great.

Sam said...

it really is quite amazing how much can be said and portrayed within a few lines!!

Carrie said...

Great haiku! I had to keep reworking mine to fit the syllables

Jay @halftime lessons said...

Great blog, and stunning header!
Jay @ HalftimeLessons.com


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I wrote about how to do it here...

Sue said...

Well done!
I just love a good haiku, don't you?

Laura Ingalls Gunn said...

I beautiful haiku. I never could write one very well. :)

J'Ollie Primitives said...

Applause.
Beautiful haiku. Love the imagery.

Mama Kat said...

Atta girl! Very nicely done. :)